From eb4dd646ffca89941c07ba2f39cc3cb366892386 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: manolomartinez <manolo@austrohungaro.com>
Date: Tue, 26 Nov 2013 21:24:51 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading index.html

I haven't touched style, just (what I believe to be) linguistic infelicities.
---
 index.html | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 0cdcf38..aa17d73 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@
         </header>
 
         <main>
-            <h2 class="bit-1 copy"> Cmder is a software package created out of pure frustration over absence of nice
-                console emulator on Windows. It is based on amazing software, spiced up with Monokai color scheme and
-                custom prompt layout. Looking sexy from the start.
+            <h2 class="bit-1 copy"> Cmder is a software package created out of pure frustration over the absence of nice
+                console emulators on Windows. It is based on amazing software, and spiced up with the Monokai color scheme and
+                a custom prompt layout. Looking sexy from the start.
             </h2>
 
             <section class="container information">
@@ -45,8 +45,8 @@
                 <div class="bit-3">
                     <div class="imgWrapper"><img src="img/git_thumb.png" alt=""></div>
                     <h4>Git and others</h4>
-                    <p>Oooh yes! if you decide to use the the <em>slightly</em> bigger <a href="https://code.google.com/p/msysgit/">
-                    msysgit</a> version. You will have all Unix commands ready in PATH and you can <code>git init</code>
+                    <p>Oooh yes! If you decide to use the the <em>slightly</em> bigger <a href="https://code.google.com/p/msysgit/">
+                    msysgit</a> version, you will have all Unix commands ready in PATH so that you can <code>git init</code>
                     or <code>cat</code> instantly on every machine.</p>
                 </div>
             </section>
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
                     <h4>Shell</h4>
                     <ul>
                         <li><code>Shift + Up</code> : Traverse up in directory structure (lovely feature!)</li>
-                        <li><code>End, Home, ctrl</code> : Traversing text with as usual on Windows</li>
+                        <li><code>End, Home, ctrl</code> : Traverse text as usual on Windows</li>
                         <li><code>Ctrl + r</code> : History search</li>
                         <li><code>Shift + mouse</code> : Select and copy text from buffer</li>
                         <li><code>Right click / Ctrl + Shift + v</code> : Paste text </li>
@@ -115,24 +115,24 @@
 
             <div class="bit-2">
                 <h4>Aliases</h4>
-                <p>There is simple support for aliases. They can by using alias command like <code>alias ls=ls --color $*
-                </code> They are pretty much just <em>doskeys</em> in file <code>/config/aliases</code>. One per line.
-                And make sure to handle arguments by putting arguments variable <code>$*</code> somewhere.</p>
+                <p>There is simple support for aliases. They can be created by using the <code>alias</code> command like this: <code>alias ls=ls --color $*
+                </code> They are pretty much just <em>doskeys</em> in <code>/config/aliases</code>. One per line.
+                And make sure to handle arguments by putting argument variables <code>$*</code> somewhere.</p>
 
                 <h4>Updating + Building</h4>
-                <p>There is not much going on in this realm. But if you want to get most recent updates for Conemu just
-                tick auto-updating in preferences. If you want to clone the repo and build it yourself. You will need <em>
+                <p>There is not much going on here. But if you want to get most recent updates for Conemu just
+                tick <em>auto-updating</em> in preferences. If you want to clone the repo and build it yourself, you will need <em>
                 Ruby, wget and 7z</em>. When you are set on that, just run <code>build_cmder.rb</code>.</p>
             </div>
             <div class="bit-2">
                 <h4>PowerShell</h4>
                 <p>I have to admit here that <em>I am not a <abbr title="PowerShell, Duh!">PS</abbr> guy</em>. So do not
-                expect any improvement or tips in that spectrum. But <strong>if you are a PS geek</strong> You
+                expect any improvement or tips in that department. But <strong>if you are a PS geek</strong> You
                 really should start submitting some amazing tweaks.</p>
 
                 <h4>Other documentations</h4>
-                <p>If you have trouble with anything I am happy to help. But you will have much bigger chances to find solution
-                on the pages of base projects. Those are:
+                <p>If you have trouble with anything I am happy to help. But you will have much better chances to find solutions
+                on the pages of the upstream projects. Those are:
                 <ul>
                     <li>Console emulator ~ <a href="https://code.google.com/p/conemu-maximus5/">Conemu</a></li>
                     <li>Cmd.exe enhancements ~ <a href="https://code.google.com/p/clink/">clink</a></li>